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Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Jamie
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #15 on:
June 25, 2020, 04:00:02 PM »
Hu guys, when you mentioned this on Friday I didn't hear this! Brilliant, a touch of vintage Squeeze
. Don't know how you managed to knit the vocals together, I can't even sing with myself
. Nice interview technique to PJ
.
Nice one!
Cheers
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MichaelA
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #16 on:
June 26, 2020, 11:58:10 AM »
Yep very assured interview performance
@pompeyjazz
, you took it all in your stride with ease. Here's to many more interviews to come!
And ta Jamie, yes agree it's always fascinating to finally hear a song that's been mentioned on Friday Zoom. Squeeze, great lyricists, so don't mind that reference at all.
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moraamarolaloba
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #17 on:
June 26, 2020, 01:50:41 PM »
@MichaelA
@PaulAds
@pompeyjazz
Congratulations guys !!! You have put me in a good mood and I thank you very much i my confinement,I went out a couple of days but seeing that many do not wear the mask I do not go out, I have a very delicate health and I am convinced that I would not resist the attack of the invisible monster that is why I enjoy moments like this a lot.
I love the lyrics, this line "BigMac bloodbath" is magnificent because it is true.
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Jambrains
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #18 on:
June 27, 2020, 08:15:05 AM »
Hahahahah, brilliant!!! Three vocalists should not really work but this is fab. I can't help but get a Clash vibe from this.
Very cool collab guys, big grin on my face
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MonnoDB
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #19 on:
June 27, 2020, 12:32:39 PM »
Well this is fantastic! Beautifully stitched together and very funny!!
And congrats on getting the airplay - that’s fab... great interview
@pompeyjazz
!!
Love it!
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Melusine2
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #20 on:
June 28, 2020, 06:12:45 AM »
A great track, everything is catchy, the lyrics, the music and interprétation.
A lot of fun for all of you and for us. Don't remember how Mandy times i've listened
A cool song !
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MichaelA
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #21 on:
July 01, 2020, 03:58:53 PM »
Thanks
@Melusine2
for all the listens.
There are more bands in the U.K. though that don't feature
@pompeyjazz
. Not many, as he is everywhere! But you check them out too
@MonnoDB
, ta for the comments. I'm jealous John got the interview. But I expect TV will be calling me and Paul any time soon, so no real worries.
Thanks too
@Jambrains
,
@moraamarolaloba
and
@Jamie
. All you can hope for with a song like this is that it provides a bit of fun for some folk. So very pleased you enjoyed it.
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Unclenny
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #22 on:
July 01, 2020, 04:42:23 PM »
This is great!!!
It has a serious theatrical feel to it........I want to see it on a stage with dancers!!
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Sebandme
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #23 on:
July 03, 2020, 10:38:51 AM »
Omg guys seriously!!! This is excellent loved it. I'm partial to a Maccy Ds.....the three vocals were brilliant! Great production to! Awesome
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MichaelA
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #24 on:
July 05, 2020, 11:01:43 AM »
Ha ha
@Unclenny
, if Paul, John and me had to be the dancers, well you wouldn't want to see it, believe me!
Nice thought though!
Thanks too
@Sebandme
. I thought you were too artistic for a BigMac, so there you go! 😀
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Andreas
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #25 on:
July 05, 2020, 03:45:25 PM »
I thought the three-way vocal worked very well. And I really saw my self in the lyrics :p Funny, clever and good sounding song! Well done lads
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adamfarr
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Reply #26 on:
July 11, 2020, 09:40:09 AM »
Curse you South-North-East-West-Coast Massive, I am walking around my house today singing Big Mac for the kids, Big Mac for my hunnee, and can’t stop...
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MichaelA
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #27 on:
July 11, 2020, 10:31:46 AM »
Ha ha
@adamfarr
! You obviously have fallen victim to the subliminal earworm widget that we discretely embedded into the song. That chorus will be with you now forever unless you pay the unlock key ransom!
Thanks also to you @andreas for the listen, much appreciated.
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PaulAds
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Re: Collab with PaulAds & PompeyJazz - 'Big Mac Bloodbath'
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Reply #28 on:
July 11, 2020, 10:44:28 AM »
Great feedback...thanks everyone!
I came across the lyrics I'd originally scribbled in the songs embryonic stages...but Michael had a much better idea that involved all three of us...and he wrote a great set of lyrics to go with that idea...so we didn't need these...I thought I'd put them here as a post-script and an example of how well it can work when you chuck your own stuff in the bin when something better comes along.
Gonna grab me a burger…or die trying.
Run a gauntlet of dodgem-like automobiles
For what surely must be the happiest of meals
You’d hardly suspect it’s the work of the devil
Heating the food to Hiroshima level
With the lure of processed microwave hocus pocus
They descend on the “M” like a Multitude of locusts
Suddenly unleashed after months in the dark
It’s the wacky races in a retail park
Jockey for position on a drive through lane
Eager to add to a world full of pain.
Landmark venue
Burger aforethought
Murder on the menu
Bloodbath on the forecourt
An orderly queue is a thing of the past
When you’re drawn like a moth to the 5G mast
The millionaire and the benefits claimant
Menacingly brandishing contactless payment
You’re never too early and you can’t be too late
For the restaurant that’s open 25/8
Temporary food chain procured
Early grave likely secured
You do a victory lap but it’s another own-goal
Charles Darwin commits suicide on litter patrol
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