Better Than Dead

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pnb99

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« on: June 09, 2020, 07:41:46 PM »
Hi everyone

Would greatly appreciate your thoughts/feedback on this track.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/2k9xoafrwmld6kp/Better%20Than%20Dead.wav?dl=0

Paul.


Jamie

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« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2020, 01:28:20 PM »
Hi, I agree with Pompeyjazz, it is a very pro sounding recording. I remember you posted before and I thought the same. Is your voice trained? Very good.

Cheers
Jamie

Jambrains

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« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2020, 07:30:54 PM »
Mighty good vocals and production is stellar!
Maybe not 100% my cup of tea but the craftsmanship is indisputable.
Radio ready.

Grubstar

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« Reply #4 on: June 14, 2020, 02:01:51 PM »
Hi Paul
I really enjoyed this powerful heart felt modern ballad which really grows on you with repeated listens. As others have all said; great vocals and very professional sounding production, I also really liked the synth pads, arpeggios and nuanced guitar parts and the ending was great. All in all a fabulous job, really looking forward to listening to some more of your offerings.

pnb99

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« Reply #5 on: June 15, 2020, 05:05:48 PM »
Many thanks for all your positive replies...its really encouraging. Thank you!

Paul.

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« Reply #6 on: June 16, 2020, 05:41:15 AM »
I think this track has the most important part that makes a really memorable song.
Emotion that grabs you & locks you in. The combination of melody with gifted Vocals
that have range to capture a wide spectrum of Highs & lows really draws you in.
the arrangement flows nicely, as well as the lyrics . well done !!