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Now or never
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adamwolf
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Posts: 46
Re: Now or never
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Reply #15 on:
June 13, 2020, 01:42:02 AM »
I really like the lyrics, the mixing of the drums especially does sound very 80s! And that spanish guitar whoah very cool!
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and though we cry
we must stay alive
let my blood only run out
when my world decides
there is no way out
of your only life
so run on...
run on
rightly
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1956
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Re: Now or never
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Reply #16 on:
June 13, 2020, 11:07:27 AM »
Oh well done.
The eighties were the last of the golden years of Popsong writing.
Although probably younger than me, You’re like an older brother
Always ahead of me.
Your skills at admirable.
Good song !
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It's either this or that, then again it might be the other.
I can promise you a future of slow decline.
Don't eat the yellow snow
And there you have it.
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shadowfax
Stadium Tour
Posts: 3180
Singer songwriter
Re: Now or never
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Reply #17 on:
June 17, 2020, 09:40:44 AM »
Heartfelt thanks to all who took the time to listen and comment, makes life worth living dunnit!!!
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from the nightmare!
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