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Sullish

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Streets

« on: June 01, 2020, 10:36:05 PM »
Not my usual type of effort but wanted to try something different.

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IronKnee

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Re: Streets

« Reply #1 on: June 02, 2020, 07:27:33 AM »
Hey there........I really like the metro feel about this. Feels like a great road song.
Love the atmosphere. Very easy listening, and not too busy.
Great relaxing piece.
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Re: Streets

« Reply #2 on: June 02, 2020, 11:26:51 AM »
Hola @Sulish

I like the cadence of your song, it takes you walking through those streets... I do not understand all the lyrics because it is not my language but yes the sense of the story.
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Re: Streets

« Reply #3 on: June 07, 2020, 02:32:24 PM »
Hi I really liked the electronic backing and synth work and  you've also got a great voice, this could be the basis for a great song but at the moment it is too sparse  both lyrically and melodically for my tastes.
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Re: Streets

« Reply #4 on: June 10, 2020, 01:41:02 PM »
Hi, this has some very good elements, like the guitar tone and the synths. The vocal is good to but it's a bit repetitive (the streets etc). I think this could be a very good song, but needs a bit of variation and and additional lyric imho!

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Jamie
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