[moraamarolaloba]

I think it's a strange song, in a real fusion style and lyrics describimg the reality of others mixed with this that do not happens. I find the sound is well balanced. at least I thinks...
Concerning the images... I am proud of having created a very poetic imaginary

She opened
the empty  bottle
of perfume

to smell
one more time
that memory of love
hidden there, there, there

The suitcase was waiting
on the bed
for that bottle that always
accompanied her
for that bottle that always
accompanied her

Her suitcase,
so full of voids
and goodbye

Nothing was left in the closet
the last sheet
of the calendar iving there
has already fallen
taking away with it
those days
so full of dark light
and imposed sins


There was no more sadness
there was no more excuse
o hold on  for
not being better

it's over
it's over

No more knocking
on the door of deserts

[Grubstar]

A very enjoyable original song and video driven along by a great professional sounding backing track. You have a lovely husky voice that  projects your mystical personal lyrics so well.

[moraamarolaloba]

Hola @Grubstar

Thank you very much, you rescued this new song that I like so much!!!

Take care.

Mora

[MichaelA]

A very hypnotic feeling to this one @moraamarolaloba, it just floats along mesmerically all the way through. Clever video too.

I enjoyed the mystery of the perfume story and some of the intriguing images, such as the suitcase idea, and what it means on a deeper level. Very good!

[pompeyjazz]

Another fabulous song from you @moraamarolaloba Like others have said, it's very hypnotic and atmospheric. Great imagery in the lyrics and also very unique. I really enjoyed the listen

[PaulAds]

Really enjoyed this. Another great video too. I love the degree of creativity you display...and the enthusiasm for bringing such great ideas to life.

Inspiring stuff!

ps whenever I read your posts, I try to say your name over in my head...and it always makes me feel like I'm drunk

[Paulski]

Very hypnotic groove going on here mora.
Your vocals are great and the backing track sounds very professional.
Lyrics were a little too abstract for me to connect to - but that's down to me..
One nit I did have is the word "accompanied" is pronounced incorrectly, at least to a Canadian ear.

Nice work
Paul

[Bostonfan2]

Always such intriguing music, and always great sounding vocals and cool videos !

[jacksimmons]

The super cool, darkly-funky backing track and your enigmatic, smoky vocals are an awesome pairing. Your lyrics are very evocative. You sing each word like they're heavy and important. I think this works brilliantly.

The refrain at the end reminded me of something from Yoko Ono's Approximately Infinite Universe, another dark, evocative album.

Great listen.

[Jamie]

@moraamarolaloba

Hi, another very good ethereal video and lyric. Sounded great with a lovely backing track. Someone else said intriguing, that's a good description......

Nice one!

Cheers
Jamie

[montydog]

Hi there,

I'm loving the stuff you're posting on here at the moment and this is no exception. I love the backing track - atmospheric and perfect for the song. One particular verse really drew me in:

"Nothing was left in the closet
the last sheet
of the calendar lying there
has already fallen
taking away with it
those days
so full of dark light
and imposed sins"

This is as good lyric writing as you'll come across - sublime, Joni Mitchell level I think.

Brilliant, simply brilliant.
M

[moraamarolaloba]

"... the mystery of the perfume story and some of the intriguing images, such as the suitcase idea, and what it means on a deeper level...!"

Hi @MichaelA  thank you, the suitcase on the sea, the empty perfume bottle... They come from a short story I wrote some years ago.... Special time!!!
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@pompeyjazz ! it's very hypnotic and atmospheric. Great imagery in the lyrics !
Yes, I love atmosphere!! Thank you!
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"and the enthusiasm"

Hi @PaulAds Enthusiasm? No, survival!   Thank you, I love your avatar
(ps whenever I read your posts, I try to say your name over in my head...and it always makes me feel like I'm drunk
This transforms my name in an epic trial!!!! hahahaha
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@Paulski
"Lyrics were a little too abstract for me to connect to - but that's down to me..
One nit I did have is the word "accompanied" is pronounced incorrectly, at least to a Canadian ear."
Yes, I understand. Don't worry.
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@Bostonfan2
"...great sounding vocals and cool videos..."
Thank you so much
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@jaksimmons
"You sing each word like they're heavy and important. I think this works brilliantly."

Thanks Jack, you are right, each word is important in any line...
I visited your Soundcloud channel and it looks great.
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Hi @Jamie
"...Someone else said intriguing, that's a good description......"
Thank you, everything is intriguing  for me, I call me "Emotional Detective" hahahaha
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Hi @montydog
"One particular verse really drew me in:

"Nothing was left in the closet
the last sheet
of the calendar lying there
has already fallen
taking away with it
those days
so full of dark light
and imposed sins"

These lines are very special to me, everything has its meaning within the abstract, its balance, that's why I like that you liked it. Thank you for your interest and for your commendable and overwhelming comment.
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Take care, the invisible killer continues there!!!!