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ASecretMeaning:
Well done, this is nice.  As others have said, the opening verse I think is particularly good.

Bumble Bee:
Thanks I've been having a bad time with my mental health lately x

Because of my mental health issues I can't really deal with the addiction of Facebook , Twitter etc and forums like this so I'm leaving but if anyone wants to contact me please do .

Katiewilsonisamazing@gmail.com

Thanks

hardtwistmusic:
Someone asked "Are we posting lyrics, or just words." 

This was unquestionably a lyric (or a poem) not just a collection of words. 

The meaning is vague, but then so are the meanings of many of the finest lyrics ever written.  (Think "Kiss From a Rose")  That I don't instantly figure out every detail of the story or emotions you are expressing doesn't make it any less potent.  In fact, it creates an 'intrigue factor' and leads me to want to see it again to build upon my first impressions. 

I think it's an impressive lyric,

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