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Jamie

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« Reply #15 on: May 24, 2020, 01:34:13 PM »
Hi all, thanks for listening!

@MonnoDB
Hi Karen, love your review 8). Yes, lockdown does seem to forcing us all down the groupthink road ;). Have had the Pink Floyd comment before which is cool! So pleased you enjoyed it!

@MichaelA

Hi Mike,Great comments, thanks. As I said before I was a little worried there were too many direction changes in such a short (for me anyway) song, but no-one has commented adversely yet ;D. Yes the nonsense words thing is new for me, as well as the lyric description, I will be trying it again!

Great comments from everyone, kinda makes it worthwhile!

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« Reply #16 on: May 29, 2020, 11:21:26 AM »
Hi Jamie,

Another track from your seemingly endless well of creativity - a new song every 2 weeks like clockwork! Beautifully performed arranged and produced as ever. Enough variation in pace and instrumentation to keep the listener engaged.  Can't find anything I'd change. Nice one.

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« Reply #17 on: May 30, 2020, 04:14:10 PM »
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Hi Alan, thanks for listening! Yes I do seem to have had a creative push, must be lockdown syndrome. Thanks for your cool review and kind words.

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« Reply #18 on: May 30, 2020, 04:39:32 PM »
Great song Jamie, really like the change in mood from verse to Chorus.  Love the chop chop finish, especially as the backing winds down.
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« Reply #19 on: May 30, 2020, 07:24:52 PM »
Hi jamie,

Great groove on this, like the bassline and the funky 16th style beats, great contrast on the vocal,

Sounding cool here, some nice guitar work in there too,

Top work,

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« Reply #20 on: May 31, 2020, 08:48:20 AM »
@Jamie - Smooth stuff, tight as hell, lovely BV sync precision, maybe alternate the vol of the lo and hi Jump jump jump lines in the outro to add contrast .

A really strong song Jamie, a your prod is right up there.

A pleasure to listen to.


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« Reply #21 on: June 01, 2020, 12:46:14 PM »
Hi guys, thanks for listening!

@PeteS
Hi Pete, Glad you liked the change, I did wonder if it was too much of a 'handbrake turn' but apparently not! ;).

@Cawproductions
Hi,thanks I don't often get the 'groove' word in my reviews so I'm chuffed about that. Yes I doubled the bass line with a keyboard bass to make it punchier. Thanks for the great comments!

@cowparsleyman
Hi Rich, glad you enjoyed it, yes the sync on the chorus is spot on (if I say so myself ;)) but don't ask me how I did it! :o :P. Thanks for the production comments, baby steps, but in the right direction maybe?

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