Hi all, a new song from me, all constructive criticism welcome!
I posted something in the 'Writing' section a few days ago and this song is a result of the 'Revelation' described in that post.I also took a new approach to the lyrics on this offering. Usually I pull from a cache of lyrics I've previously written and try to match them with the 'feel' of the song. This time I didn't.I started with the instruments and built them up and then thought about words. I didn't try to write them, I sang meaningless words (no change there some might say!
) and waited to see if something emerged. The first words I came up with became the chorus 'Will I ever get out of here',maybe that indicates my pandemic lockdown frame of mind
. From that the first verse followed easily, bringing out the 'trapped' idea. The second verse another 'trapped' theme as I people being trapped by war using aeroplanes and bombs as the allegorical theme. The third voice was another slant on trapped and that is being 'trapped ' by an allegation of unproven 'truth or guilt' and the associated blame game that follows all major events. The bridge is a metaphor for how relatively useless (but maybe better than nothing)advice is generally given by governments during major World or country wide issues. Mainly given to promote the illusion that governments know better.EG in the cold war it was government advice that in the event of a nuclear attack, you should 'get under a table' and I read recently that in the USA the advice given if you're in the path of a deadly tornado you should 'get in the bath'. In the outro I thought of chanting a children's nursery rhyme to emphasis the 'darkness' of it. I don't usually explain my lyrics, but I was taken by
@PaulAds explanation of his Stalingrad based song lyrics so I've decided to follow his lead
https://soundcloud.com/jamie1802/trapped-1Trapped
I am trapped in this place
I'm never getting out
Their engines are running
and the payload is on board
Will I ever get out of here
Will I ever get out of here
Will I ever get out of here
Will I ever get out of here
Get under the table
or hide in the bath
The TV's buzzing
and the buildings on fire
Will I ever get of here
Will I ever get out of here
Wasn't me look at them
not guilty conscience clear
Will I ever get out of here
Will I ever get out of here
Will I ever get out of here
Will I ever get out of here
Here comes a candle to light you to bed
Here comes a chopper to cut off your head
Chop chop chop and the last ones dead
Chop chop chop and the last ones dead
Look forward to your considered views!
Cheers
Jamie