So first tune ever fully recorded- a steep learning curve!
THE TRACK UNTAKEN
https://drive.google.com/file/d/17qBxiIpXfo6OWDmiRIo7hthSkIkANP4V/view?usp=sharingInterested in some constructive feedback-
1.anything different I could do in the middle 8 section? A solo feels like a cop out?
2. would it work as well without the bass intro/break?
3. I think the chorus lyrics work well together (based on the Robert Frost poem THe Road Not Taken) but not sure the verses compliment that idea enough
Lyrics
One more grounded pilot
Another beached white shark
The holes shot in your gas tank have you
Trudging home in the dark
These Boots keep dragging me
Further down a track untaken
Once more step out unsure
with a heavy laod on the hollow road
A badge against evil
A talisman for fear
When the compass span out
St Christopher left us here
These Boots keep dragging me
Further down a track untaken
Once more step out unsure
with a heavy laod on the hollow road