'Squiggle' - my lie detector song!

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Paulski

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« Reply #15 on: May 14, 2020, 12:44:12 AM »
Hi Michael
What a cool song this is :D
Great story - smart rhymes and the chorus really lifts as it damn well should!
Love the vox and the harms in the chorus especially.
Disco theramin who'd a thought?

Maybe the name should be "Truth or Lies" ??

Solid track indeed - SOTM? - nice!
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« Reply #16 on: May 14, 2020, 03:48:15 AM »
Love it, Man...............you never know where the inspiration is going to come from...or, when it will present itself!.
Love the tune.......lots of fun......keep on!!
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« Reply #17 on: May 14, 2020, 09:48:40 AM »
Hi @Paulski , thanks for the appreciative nod. Yep I guess your song title suggestion is more memorable. I just think 'squiggle' is a great word though! Should be in more song titles if you ask me.  :D

Hi @IronKnee , thanks for the listen and the encouragement, cheers.
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« Reply #18 on: May 20, 2020, 06:31:18 PM »
Cool tune. Great production.

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« Reply #19 on: May 24, 2020, 04:23:05 PM »
Hello @MichaelA
I have had a lot of fun with your song and lyrics, so acidic and naked, a brilliant photograph of the harshness that surrounds us and that we consume. I loved the chorus, images for a good short movie!
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« Reply #20 on: May 24, 2020, 06:43:59 PM »

 Hi Michael, Hope you are well and thriving. ;D

 This was not what I was expecting...i Love it ;D. Right back to the 80's.  Had me looking for the mascara ;D
 Everything about this is seriously good mate ;D.  The lyrics are a work of art...of course ;D.  The instrumentation, arrangement, and production
 are perfect ;D ;D. Love the driving energy, and the chorus is to die for........are you the Pet Shop Boys ;D

 Take care....Stay Safe ;D ;D

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