@Rightly - Love your work, so unique, love this, it's engaging right from the beginning, some lovely synth work, Can't help thinking BV's would add contrast and thicken up the Vox overall.
The drums could benefit from some kind of alternate pattern/fills near the end natural phrases.
Like you did on the Vocal near the end maybe mangle the drums a bit, either through an envelope follower, or a vocoder on a bus, so you can mix the amount you need, only ideas Rightly man.
Nice work, super cool.
@cowparsleyman Hi.
Yes I was too quick in posting this.
I was exhausted and high on that sax solo,
I had to go into another dimension to get it.
I've already made significant improvements
a voice cloner on the chorus voice, slight changes with the horn harmonies.
BVs I find hard to imagine if it's not another, a different voice.
I'll look into it.
I went to the trouble of tweaking the voice in places with the standard Cubase version of auto tune.
Before singing I found the melody on the piano, then after examinationi found my voice rough in places but really not too bad.
I wanted to do something light and comedic to counter the harder material on the album,
so I'm really happy with the outcome here.