[adamfarr]

Great lyrics (and theme) - the cracking and spitting lines are ... cracking.

Strings are fab. If there was one thing I wasn't sure about then it would be the drums which are huge but maybe a touch too huge for this style?

Vocals sounding really good - perhaps even some harmonies in the final chorus could be the icing on the cake to match the power of the backing?

Catchy and original!

[Sebandme]

@MonnoDB I love this, right up my street love the bass, and the strings a really great. You have such a unique voice  .

The arrangement is awesome
Great collaboration @MonnoDB & @Jambrains

[The Estuary (SWE)]

I think this is an excellent song. I'm an old disco fan so this sits well with me, and it has a modern feel to it. The vivid string arrangements, the guitar, the drums - there's so much that add to the energy of the song. The vocals fit in very well too. I find the song benefits from being played loud. I recommend you to try it!

[MonnoDB]

Thanks a mill @adamfarr for the comments and suggestions. There are actually harms in there - perhaps we need to bring them up / add to them...

Thanks so much @Sebandme and @The Estuary (SWE) ... much appreciated!!

K

[Unclenny]

Another great song from Ashes For Dreams @MonnoDB and @Jambrains . You guys know I am a fan already, though. I love the way you sing this one.

I'm with @MichaelA about the ABBA comparison.

 

[Morefrog Jones]

Agree with the cinematic quality - lovely strings, good storytelling with the dark subject lyrics, really rate the vocals on this production.

[MonnoDB]

Another great song from Ashes For Dreams @MonnoDB and @Jambrains . You guys know I am a fan already, though. I love the way you sing this one.

I'm with @MichaelA about the ABBA comparison.

 

Hey @Unclenny  - welcome to the forum.. Great to see you around these parts ! Hope you stick around - you'll find a friendly and very helpful bunch! Thanks for the lovely comments..

@Morefrog Jones - thanks so much for your comments. Much appreciated!

K