To an American ear, the few, following minor changes would be helpful. \
A man was singing by a river bank
He was homeless hungry ugly and stank
People passing by quickly ran along
Laughing at his looks, and his smelly his smell, and his song
They got lost in canyon, befriended attacked by a gecko
And died hearing the man's song echo
Echo echo should every song
Sang Be sung by everyone
Right or wrong
Our man was singing then and still singing now
He's still alive and stinking but rocking somehow
His song's grim, badly sang sung and shoddy
Forever and ever feeding soul and body
Echo echo should every song
(Be) Sang sung by everyone
Right or wrong
Echo song echo...
