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Andreas

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« on: April 21, 2020, 06:25:58 PM »
Still going at my 30 day - 30 songs - challenge, had to skip yesterday, due to an exam delivery, but on day 21 now, and the songs are just getting more and more personal. It has really helped me to stay creative and it keeps me happy, well music itself is what keeps me happy. This song I also got mastered from Soundclouds mastering tool, and I think it developed the song till the better. Opening it up a little more, making it more distinct.

https://soundcloud.com/musicbyandreas/walls-demo

Lyrics:

You see i`ve been having doubts that i`ll ever measure up
You see the voices inside my head has been saying i`ll never be good enough

I`ve been building walls so tall they can never be broken down
I`ve been by myself on the highest shelf wearing a paper crown
But i`ll break these walls, i`ll break these walls, i`ll tear them down
I`ll break these walls, break these walls, i`ll tear them down
For you

You see i`ve been trying so hard, to be tough and not to cry
You see i`ve been broken down, and sometimes I wish I just would die

I`ve been building walls so tall they can never be broken down
I`ve been by myself on the highest shelf wearing a paper crown
But i`ll break these walls, i`ll break these walls, i`ll tear them down
I`ll break these walls, break these walls, i`ll tear them down
For you


I will fight for my surrender
I will stay in your arms forever

I`ve been building walls so tall they can never be broken down
I`ve been by myself on the highest shelf wearing a paper crown
But i`ll break these walls, i`ll break these walls, i`ll tear them down
I`ll break these walls, i`ll break these walls, i`ll tear them down
For you

All the best, Andreas

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« Reply #1 on: April 21, 2020, 08:04:33 PM »
Very beautiful voice, the interpretation is very brilliant  :) especially if you composed it in 1 day. It's full of intensity. The sound of the guitar could be improved a little bit but it's only a detail because you have the essential.
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Andreas

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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2020, 12:09:04 PM »
Very beautiful voice, the interpretation is very brilliant  :) especially if you composed it in 1 day. It's full of intensity. The sound of the guitar could be improved a little bit but it's only a detail because you have the essential.
Thank you so much for listening! :) The hardest part is definitely to remember a new lyric everyday and usually one I have written that day and not practised as well as I would have usually :p And then when I am done with the 30 days, I will go through the songs to see if there is anyone I want to work more on etc etc.

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« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2020, 01:37:54 AM »
You are very versatile, your voice is amazing, I hear power, but at the same time tenderness. Vibrato is good too. I definitely like it.

I would like to ask you not to be sad, but then there will be no such wonderful songs.