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Is it over ?
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Mind of a Girl:
This is about moving on
Is it over ?
Is it over ?
Is it over this time ?
Is it over , have I crossed the line ?
I can’t get you
Can’t get you outta my mind
but I know that it’s something that I have to do
deep down I always knew
I kept pushing
kept pushing you away
I know it’s over
and you ain’t coming back
my heart is broken
my souls under attack
you have my blessing as you go on your way
there’s no point in asking you to stay
because it’s over
Until another day
I know it’s over
until another day
I know it’s over
until another day
DFT:
Hi Mind of a Girl,
I think I get it... the rhythm of the lyrics is pretty good.
Pretty good and I think I like it too.
How about putting it to music?
PopTodd:
Do you have any music yet? Would love to hear it.
Arthur_Satine:
The lyrics is good, need to be a full song, don't you have a demo?
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