make-believe-me

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rightly

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« Reply #15 on: May 08, 2020, 11:47:22 PM »
Hi @rightly, really enjoyed this. I like it that you have a lighter, quirkier side too. Well it's still a bit dark, but humorously so and a good contrast to some of your heavier mood stuff.

The chorus is completely crazy and that sax is wonderfully meandering and out of control, ha ha! You sing it like a theatrical actor doing a soliloquy on stage. Great stuff  ;)

I've got to say here,
I'm a very humorous fella. I don't care much for life without it.
I usually have a blast.
It's difficult to get humor in this medium, cleverness is easy, a lot of it is, anger, lust... Easy.
I think Dylan could do it better than prince.

I'm getting more critical of my voice, a long way to go. I may never get there but I will go far.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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Bostonfan2

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« Reply #16 on: May 09, 2020, 01:22:47 AM »
I really liked your vocal on this tune, the song is different and yet engaging.
the percussion was the one area that stood out I thought with improvement, would enhance this unique track :)

rightly

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« Reply #17 on: May 09, 2020, 02:14:13 PM »
I really liked your vocal on this tune, the song is different and yet engaging.
the percussion was the one area that stood out I thought with improvement, would enhance this unique track :)

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Okay. Thing is I've made big improvements on the track.
Haven't had time to upload it yet.
Maybe this evening.

It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly

The Estuary (SWE)

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« Reply #18 on: May 25, 2020, 12:56:28 PM »
This is mad enough for me! I really like the melody and the dreamlike atmosphere. Great vocals, too.