Last Night At The Station (Vocals by Ce Mz)

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« Reply #15 on: April 05, 2020, 12:40:03 AM »
Lovely Vocals & song! Mix sounds real good to me, welcome to the forum @Melusine2!
Im still new here myself, these folks are not only very talented but great people as well!

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« Reply #16 on: April 05, 2020, 08:31:39 AM »
Thank guys and girls  ;) ;D

@IronKnee , @Sullish @MonnoDB @nooms @Bostonfan & @Sterix and if I forgot someone , hope not,  i am sorry

All your comments about vocals touched me :) (hope this french expression exists in english  :o)
I am really glad to know & be part now this great forum, yes guys I discover new musics, new artists with talents, greats & kinds :),

@pompeyjazz  : I am so happy that our virtual musical encounter lead to make music beyond fronteers , to know a little more about you, and yes I'm counting on you for new collabs, I'll be very pleased, and will enjoy it for sure.

j'espère ne pas avoir trop "abimé" votre belle langue :)

Bonne journée à tous,

Cécile


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« Reply #17 on: April 05, 2020, 10:20:59 AM »
Really like the new mix guys (though a couple of pops around 1’46”?).
Well done indeed!

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« Reply #18 on: April 05, 2020, 07:10:36 PM »
Lovely track and a lovely voice too.
I would shadow what other people have said here and just note that the mix sounds a little bit frequencies-clash-y (that's the technical term). I'm also not totally sure if my ears are hearing right but it does sound a little heavily compressed too, it feels like it should breathe a bit more.
Honestly though, I'm nit picking and I really enjoyed the piece! I'd love to hear it sung in French :)
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« Reply #19 on: April 06, 2020, 03:14:51 PM »
Loved the jingly guitars and vocals. It's a great song also. My only issue is that the instrumentation was a little busy and indistinct compared to the vocal but otherwise a very lovely song, beautifully sung and played.

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« Reply #20 on: April 06, 2020, 04:12:57 PM »
Hi Pomps,

Again nice song, on my monitors didnt hear any boominess but you may have fixed the mix on that by now, The lady vocalist has a lot of energy in the 3k range, I would compress the S**t out of them to get back control. also a bit of automation.

Nice overall sound tho, acoustic GTRS sound nice and wide. (I like that), the vocalist has a an intimate vocal, I think someone said you should drop a softer mr pomps vox in with that, I reckon that would be smooth.

Again I am with Shadowfax, I dont like picking holes peoples hard work, lovely track and top work on bringing it all together.

Cheers
Andy

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« Reply #21 on: April 06, 2020, 05:54:52 PM »
@David Christy Jones @montydog and @Cawproductions Thank you all so much for your feedback - I would much prefer to have this kind of constructive feedback than anything else. Every day is a learning day for me. It's always exciting and interesting working with new vocalists. If I'm doing the vocals myself, I've got a pretty reliable FX chain that suits my rusty old voice box but mixing vocals with a different tone takes a bit of work.

Thank you all so much once again  :) 

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« Reply #22 on: April 06, 2020, 11:26:04 PM »
A fine song. Interesting to hear it sung by someone else.
Sounds to me like a twelve string
I don't care much for the voice, just not my thing, too sugary sensual.
I'm sure everyone else likes it.
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« Reply #23 on: April 07, 2020, 06:43:51 PM »
Ooh...Fabulous vocals and I loved the feel and simplicity of it.

Guitars sound great (a capo, I'm guessing? I found one in the cupboard t'other day and I remembered how excellent they can sound!)

Really great little song...lovely understated performances too...it must be hard to hold back when you can really go to town!

More than happy to listen to much more like this, please!
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« Reply #25 on: April 07, 2020, 10:07:52 PM »
Well, I sure wasn't ready for that to end! What a nice, light, airy sound....

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« Reply #26 on: April 08, 2020, 10:25:14 PM »
@pompeyjazz

Yo John,I caught this one on FB,good to take another earful.

The female vox are lovely and I love the way you make room for them in the mix. The capoed guitar has a mandolin feel (I've been thinking about buying one of those cheapies just...because   ;D)

Love this John,quite a bit different for you too.

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« Reply #27 on: April 08, 2020, 10:41:41 PM »
Thank you @Skub .Yep those capos are weird beasts indeed    ;D Working on some more collab stuff with @Melusine2 which is a refreshing change after having to listen to my own vocals !

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« Reply #28 on: April 10, 2020, 10:46:36 AM »
Hi PJ/Cecile,

Really good song.
Vocal is so natural and well delivered. Quality.
Music is quite uplifting, and a nice contrast to the lyrical theme.

I get some Stones too - kind of As Tears Go By vibe.

Great collab.

Digger