New Song 'It All Comes Down To Love'

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Muso1070

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« on: April 01, 2020, 12:52:11 PM »
Hey all just finished a new song here called 'It All Comes Down To Love'.
Lyrics added below and would appreciate any feedback.

Thanks



Lyrics

V1
The rising tide, on your mind
Take my hand lets go
Fill your cup, Dragonflies
It's a long way round this coast

C1
We could run away today
In the shadow of the Sun
Leave It all behind lets stray
Cause baby you and me were one
In your eyes the world looks fine
It all comes down to love...

V2
Spinning round, the world outside
You and me here feels right
The afterglow, a burning light
It slowly fades through time

C2
We could run away today
In the shadow of the Sun
Leave It all behind lets stray
Cause baby you and me were one
In your eyes the world looks fine
It all comes down to love...


Instrumental.

C3
We could run away today
In the shadow of the Sun
Leave It all behind lets stray
Cause baby you and me were one
In your eyes the world looks fine
It all comes down to love...
It all comes down to love...

Andyb

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« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2020, 08:11:35 PM »
Your voice has a great tone but I get the feeling you are holding back a little bit ? If you open that voice it could be truly great. Guitar a little over processed for my liking but all in all very good work


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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2020, 09:29:25 AM »
Hey thank you appreciate that and yes I can try to open up the voice :-)


Your voice has a great tone but I get the feeling you are holding back a little bit ? If you open that voice it could be truly great. Guitar a little over processed for my liking but all in all very good work

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« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2020, 09:33:26 AM »
Hello glad you like thanks.
I know what you mean but sometimes repetition works well, each song is different and some suit that kinda thing :-)


Hello, Yes a great voice, a nice music, maybe a bit repetitive, have a nice evening