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maya sagi
Busker
Posts: 8
time goes
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March 22, 2020, 01:06:06 PM »
Your'e walking dowan a road you know nothing about
You lead with your faith but you burry your doubt
theres one million things that you cant even learn today
but maybe tomorrow youll find a way
You've got so much on your mind but you don't even think
You try to lead with your heart but left your conscience to sink
theres one million problems that you wont let yourself see
you think if you will close your eyes they will no longer be
but time goes time flies
and disappears to blue skies
time passes time mends
and eventually time ends
Acting like you got the answer but youre not even sure
maybe someday youll reach the spot where your intesntions are pure
theres so many smiles that you just wiped away
but maybe tomorrow youll make them stay
You have so much pain in your eyes and you dont know why
when youre all alone that your eyes start to cry
theres one million reasons why youre not okay
but admitting you need help is something youll never say
but time goes time flies
and disappears to blue skies
time passes time mends
and eventually time ends
I know those things someday they wont matter
cause everyday the world gets better
and maybe we dont but the world goes on
we should leave a good mark thats why I wrote this song
for you to get better cause right now it matters
we should live in the present
and time goes time flies
and disappears to blue skies
time passes time mends
and time ends
time makes us feel time heals
time can kill time isnt real
Im open for any sort of feedback
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PaulyX
Stadium Tour
Posts: 1796
Re: time goes
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March 22, 2020, 09:35:20 PM »
Hi Maya, is there a link to a recording? If not, pop this in the "lyrics" section and you'll get more replies I'm sure.
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It's all too beautiful.
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