[Pez]

Hi, my daughter wrote and recorded her first song yesterday. Let me know what you think! Thanks a lot

https://soundcloud.com/user-41039832/aeroplane-mode

[shadowfax]

Nice singing..nice voice, song sounds like it was written after listening to Grace Vanderwaal but hey, we're all influenced by something or somebody aint we...

[jacksimmons]

Great tune and a great voice. She sounds older than her years, and so do the lyrics. She could be a natural writing melodies like this at such a young age. Hopefully she sticks to it as she could make some great music in the not too distant future.

[Andreas]

Great song, great lyrics and great vocals! Definitely a lot of talent here

[Pez]

Thanks for the replies, very encouraging!

[David Christy Jones]

Thats a very mature and developed voice for a 12 year old, fair play!
Very impressed with the rhythmic attack on the vocals. Might be nice to try putting some harmonies on this song, and bring it to the next level. It could really sell, there's no doubt at all in my mind about that. Real Lily Allen vibes to it.

Keep it up, that's a real talent!

[skogge]

12 years you say? I can just send my big love and keep up the good work. I hear a lot of personality and attitude here. I´ve been listening to a lot of bedroom recordings with just an ukulele, a guitar or in some cases a simple piano where the delivery and the song is everything. You nailed it daughter. Keep on digging around, or where you stand, and finetuning your thing. And... you already got a cool name.
 
I´ve got a twelve year old girl at home too. She likes to make annoying noises and refuses to visit my basement studio or to sing something...

[Jamie]

@Pez
Hi, doesn't sound like a 12 year old, thats for sure. Excellent voice, should keep going sounds great.

Cheers
Jamie

[Grubstar]

A very nice song, good melody and interesting lyrics sung with a real maturity that belies her years.

[Pez]

Thanks for all the lovely comments! Macey is surprised but obviously very pleased with them all!!!

All the best,
Dan Pez

[Inanité_sonore]

Hi,
You have a beautiful voice and your interpretation is excellent, made of intensity and softness.
 The minimalism of the accompaniment is perfect to give space to this superb voice.
The song itself is very beautiful, very original, with interesting lyrics.
You have a great sense of composition. 
I like it very much, it's brilliant! 

[Pez]

Thanks for the brilliant feedback!!!

[adamfarr]

Hi - what a great song. I'd turn down the ukulele a bit as it sometimes clashes a bit with the vocal (but then I don't really like them so that's just my prejudice!).

Simple production really suits this one though and the talent shines through.

Keep going for it!
 

[PaulyX]

Yeah that's pretty astonishing delivery for someone who is 12 years old.  Wow.  Really good song.  Can you post the lyrics please?  I liked the ones I could make out, but couldn't hear them all.

[cowparsleyman]

@Pez - Very nice indeed, +1 with Adam Farr - Uke needs taming, or at least widening leaving the centre free.

A great start to what will be a fantastic musical journey. Is she studying music at school?