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Delicious Grace - Wonder

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alcapone_dudu

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« Reply #1 on: February 18, 2020, 09:51:39 PM »
Lyrics: Wonder

What have you done to yourself you wonder?
Your time has come and passed and makes you wonder
Life is really tough sometimes you wonder
There’s no help in sight and so you wonder

Today is Monday morning and you still wonder
The day after tomorrow you’ll do aswell
This idea is stuck into your head
Where are you going ? I’m sorry but I can’t tell

chorus:
When I look to the sky
And your name come to mind
All I see is special lights

Always bright like the sun
All the colors on the lawn
You remember me of neon lights

What you shoud’ve never do
Is look to the ground!

You said it happend all again
Is your life really coming to and end?
There’s no point saying that they need
You already made f*cking bad decision!

chorus:
When I look to the sky
And your name come to mind
All I see is special lights

Always bright like the sun
All the colors on the lawn
You remember me of neon lights

What you shoud’ve never do
Is look to the ground!

Inanité_sonore

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« Reply #2 on: March 05, 2020, 08:54:06 PM »
Hi,
I like the energy delivered. That's a great song ! The muddy sound is really rocking, that's what it takes. Maybe you should improve the levels between the instruments because the voice seems a bit detached from the rest and the guitar seems to play sometimes in the next room.
Did you record it in one take with one mic in the room ?
IS

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alcapone_dudu

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« Reply #3 on: March 09, 2020, 08:23:44 PM »
Hi,
I like the energy delivered. That's a great song ! The muddy sound is really rocking, that's what it takes. Maybe you should improve the levels between the instruments because the voice seems a bit detached from the rest and the guitar seems to play sometimes in the next room.
Did you record it in one take with one mic in the room ?

Hey man! Thanks for giving it a try. I'm glad you liked some of it.

We've recorded it separetely. One take for each instrument basically.

Inanité_sonore

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« Reply #4 on: March 21, 2020, 10:16:05 AM »
One take for each instrument, great job  ;)
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My project "Black Gift" :
listen the album and buy CD & vinyl :
https://blackgift.bandcamp.com/releases

Listen :
https://soundcloud.com/black_gift/tracks

Inanité Sonore Records :
https://soundcloud.com/user-24297189