Hello chums!
Recently I got the full version of Studio One pro and have been able to utilize MIDI stuff a lot more since.
This has been leading me down a properly experimental rabbit hole into writing styles I know little to nothing about.
As part of my journey I've been trying to compose pieces entirely in MIDI with no real instruments at all.
This song is the first one that I've got to a stage where it's actually listenable.
I do feel, however, that it may be missing that crucial 'something' to really make it feel like a fully realized piece.
My hunch is that it all lies in the vocals, but I have had a very hard time putting vocals to this as it's not something I'm trained at hearing very well given the electronic context.
I'd love to hear any suggestions or critiques you have that may help to improve this song and bring it to a completion!
Thanks everyone!
Lyrics:
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Surrealist Macabre
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Chorus:
Dali and Lynch,
Zappa and Vliet,
Giger and Bosch see something I can't reach.
Cyriak, Firth,
Shpongle and Tool,
It's the invisible world they hold the pathway to.
Verse:
I've seen nothing to suggest
The abnormal comes from my head.
Maybe I'll try taking every drug,
Or meditate 'til I have dug enough.
The surrealist macabre that I chase,
Has left me nothing but a bitter a taste.
I never seem to recall my dreams,
To capture and bottle them and find a release.