[adamfarr]

Great storytelling, lovely details and descriptions. The way you (both) sing "to have your life, part of mine?" is especially beautiful. Such a relaxed and peaceful picture.

[crystalsuzy]

Hi Suzy, really nice and interesting to hear your style from a few years back. It does sound quite a bit more mainstream for you, but there are hints are what was to come with the densely written lyrics and the double vocal technique. I think it suited you, that more stripped back and chilled out mode. It's a lovely song for Valentine's, very wistful and charming. I enjoyed it very much 

thanks Michael, much appreciated. glad you found it charming an wistful. I did write a lot of songs that were quite mainstream when I first started out. It wasn't till I discovered how I could produce songs in garage band with so many other instruments that launched my rather unconventional song writing career. Lol!

[montydog]

Hi Suzy,
Shades of "Summer The First Time" by Bobby Goldsboro. This is more conventional than your later songs but there is nothing wrong with that. I like the interplay between the two lead voices - almost Sony & Cher-like or perhaps the Mama & The Papas. In fact the whole thing has a late 60's summer of love feel to it particularly the flute part. A lovely confection of a song.

M

[LostBoy]

Well thats a really beautiful song Suz!!! Its got such a gorgeous melody all dressed up with some sublime, beach boysesque harmonies.😁👍🏻  i love the random zap Sfx before the recorder solo. Really Well done mate....and btw...you two sound great together.🎶👍🏻🎶

[crystalsuzy]

Awesome tune, and wonderful harmonic work!
It's been said already but a real feel of the 60's/70's folk here.
At first I kinda felt Joni Mitchell but to be honest, on second and third listen it is far more CSN&Y.

I have nothing to say in regards to improving on this, to be honest. It's a very well constructed and executed piece. If I was to do anything to it I would add a very gentle flute. I feel the voicing of a flute would blend beautifully with the harmonies. But that's about the only thing I would add, and it's perfect without it.

Love it!

thanks so much for your lovely comments DCJ. CSN&Y...thanks! I like the idea of adding a flute to blend with the voices.

[Bankie]

I don't think I can add to what's already been said (nice vocals, nice laid-back style, good structure, etc). Liked it very much.

[Neil C]

Suzy,
Like the honest stripped back feel of this, lyrically and just how the whole thing feels.
With a lovely easy going, hippy vibe. Love the flat flute solo too.
With Do do do do do's, sound Fx and stuff!
:-)
neil