[maya sagi]

Everywhere I go and everything I start
I stain my shoes with ink so my footprints lives a mark
I want so hard to stay but I want to live it to
and I always find myself back in that road I painted blue
and I dont know where to go
everybody has and everybody want
someome they can cling to whenever sruff go wrong
but im not like everyone
I have guarding at my front
dont mind to turn around
Im already on the run
And I dont know where to go

so now im standing here and im all alone
halfway in trough the gate halfway out of the door
so many things that passed me by
and some that I passed by to
so many lives I could have had
If only I walked barefoot

Everybody has something they dont like
about themselves no matter what
but they push it all aside
thats why im diffrent from the rest
I write to feel my best
about the problems I go trough
I wish I had someone to read them to
And I dont know where to go

so now im standing here and im all alone
halfway in trough the gate halfway out of the door
so many things that passed me by
and some that I passed by to
so many lives I could have had
If only I walked barefoot

And maybe one day rain will pour down this way
was my footprints away
Ill have no choice but to stay
and maybe one night I will not feel the fright
 put my worries aside and I will no longer hide

so now im standing here and im all alone
halfway in trough the gate halfway out of the door
so many things that passed me by
and some that I passed by to
so many lives I could have had
If only I walked barefoot

English is not my first language So Im sorry if there is any mistakes or errors

[moraamarolaloba]

Hola @maya sagi

Beautiful lyrics. I love this line
"....halfway in trough the gate halfway out of the door"

I think the story is well constructed explaining and depicting clearly what is happening.
I find you repeat "I don't know where to go" many times.
If you do this because you want repeat it, ok, if not, you could look for other words that fit in good.

Saludos,
Mora

[maya sagi]

THANK YOU SO MUCH