[pnb99]

Hi @Grubstar

Many thanks for your review and generous words.

Yes, all recorded at home. I love production work and put a lot of time and energy into it. It’s sometimes a very subjective thing and one can get easily fooled by your own ears and equipment. Therefore, it’s great to hear that other people enjoy both the song and “the sound”

I have to confess that it’s not my voice though. It’s a good friend of mine. I did everything else though! (Hope that still counts ;-) )

Thanks again.

Paul

[Yodasdad]

I think this is the first of your tracks I’ve heard... I’ll definitely be back for more.

I hope you don’t take this as a negative but to my ears, this has 80’s inspired modern Uk Eurovision entry written all over it.

Yodasdad

[pnb99]

Thanks @Yodasdad

Someone said the same thing (Eurovision) in an earlier review in this thread. I can’t hear it myself but, it’s certainly not a negative for me in any way.

Just grateful that folks listen and comment.

Thank you.

Paul

[irwin]

Hi pnb99,

you have a nice sounding song here But I listen to your song I meant i really listen to it and to be honest to me something is missing. Right now I cannot say what it is but it is like I want to feel the aim high feel as i listen and I am not feeling it.

I check the lyric it goes well with the melody Yes!.

You have a nice opening first verse there, melody is great.

The second verse reads and sounds well with the melody too.

(Your Pre Chorus)
Pre-Chorus 1
I feel high, I feel low
One night down on Broadway
Too far, too soon
This is why they say

The Pre Chorus it is much stronger than the Chorus and that I can't accept (but that is only me)

All in all after hearing the whole song through it is not telling me what it needs to tell me about aim high, sorry.

but nice sounding song though.

irwin


 

[pnb99]

Many thanks for listening to my song @irwin. Sorry it doesn't "connect" with you but, I genuinely appreciate the review.