Hello everybody,
I'm a new member, write lyrics only..I'm trying to write a tender song/Ballad song lyric. I hope to hear some comments and advice on this lyric. Want to know Please ; any Chorus is better and any line in the verses as well , If there are any mistakes in meaning :
all comments will be much appreciated..
Title: The Fire Of Love © 2019 . All Rights Reserved
Verse 1:
We've talked together /so many~yyy times, 9
But you never - never realized, 9
My feelings - the longing in my eyes, 9
As my heart ca~aaalled - out and ca~aaalled; 8
or
as my heart ca~aaalled- called out to you; 8
Chorus:
The fire of love burns in me,
and I'm yearning for youuuu
The fire of love burns in me,
and I wanna kno~ooow
Does /Whether it burn in you (The fire of lo~ooove )
The fire of love burns in me,
and I'm yearning for youuuu
The fire of love burns in me,
and I wanna kno~ooow
Does /Whether it burn in you (The fire of lo~ooove )
or
Chorus :
The fire of love burns in me
The fire of love burns in me
The fire of love burns in me
The fire of love burns in me
Verse 2:
Every , every woman, nee~eeeds someone 9
Who she can trust - her one true lo~ooove. 8
or
Who she can trust - who loves her mo~ooore 8
To hold her clo~ooose when she's unsu~uuure, 8
To hear her heart ca~aaall - when it ca~aaalls; 8
Chorus :
The fire of love burns in me,
and I'm yearning for youuuu
The fire of love burns in me,
and I wanna kno~ooow
Does /Whether it burn in you (The fire of lo~ooove )
The fire of love burns in me,
and I'm yearning for youuuu
The fire of love burns in me,
and I wanna kno~ooow
Does /Whether it burn in you (The fire of lo~ooove )
Bridge:
That's an easy thing
It'll cost you nothing
Just a little of your time
To listen to ...my heart's ca~aall
Chorus:
Repeat Chorus:
