[Grubstar]

Hi Shadowfax
This really is a lovely song with great lyrics and vocal performance and first class production values.

My only improvement sugestions would be that IMO reducing the number of verses and adding a little more light and shade would make it even better.

however,it's still a beautiful and moving song .Really well done.

[Yodasdad]

A fine marrying of lyrics and music, good job the both of ya.

A few unexpected chord changes in there that gave it a nice twist.

Personally I’m hearing a call and response type counter melody in the chorus that I think would really enhance this.

With or without though, it’s still a quality collaboration.

Yodasdad

[PaulAds]

Can't believe i missed commenting on this one...thought i had...sorry!

I generally dive straight into your songs...expecting top quality...and waddayaknow...

Top Quality.

I often write lyrics and then try to figure out a tune...but i've been moving away from doing things that way of late...it's a great exercise and often not easy to do...but you've taken a really good set of lyrics and put it all together expertly.

Nice going, Kev!