[cowparsleyman]

That’s really nice of you to take the time to say that,  I’m only a relatively new member here but i concur with your comments, the folk here are very selfless.

[crystalsuzy]

BIG WELCOME to the forum Grubstar And what a great first song. Totally enjoyed the listen and love how the chorus lifts the song. I like the context of the lyrics and the way they're delivered vocally I think the bass could come up a little and the drums and synth are maybe a little too predominant in the mix, but pretty minor points and I'm certainly no expert when it comes to mixing Can't wait to hear more of your songs 

[Sebandme]

@Grubstar  I think its pretty cool! Got a feeling of Joy Division!


Chrous is strong!

Good job :-)

Only thing intro could be shorter, that's my only thing tho!

[shadowfax]

That really is a catchy chorus...just had to come back and confirm that the tune goin round in my head was this song..and it was!!

[PaulyX]

I thought this was a powerful mid-tempo piece, very nicely produced with all the elements finding their space (there's a lot going on but it doesn't feel cluttered).  Nothing I would suggest to change.  The synth/guitar balance put me in mind of latter-day Genesis.  Nice to hear one of your tracks and I look forward to hearing more.

[Yodasdad]

Quality first offering.

I don’t think I can add anything that hasn’t already been said, so I’ll just look forward to what you deliver next.

Okay, one thing, the ending was a little abrupt, could have done with a few more seconds to end naturally imho.

Yodasdad

[PaulAds]

Very much my kind of sound. A cracking song. I'd have liked to have heard a little bit more punch in the bass end...but that's nowt, really.

Really strong lyrically and nice vocals too.