The end of the end

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Misanthropist

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« on: December 25, 2019, 08:22:03 PM »
The man in a suit
Is pretty cute
Look at him now
Sad
Somehow
Things are looking grim
There's no lady no lady with him

But the man has no doubt
She's somewhere in a crowd
Look at her now
Sad
Somehow
Looking really good
Waiting waiting for the man in a suit

They finally met
For a tete a tete
Look at them now
Sad
somehow
Trying and crying in vain
Cos there's no no love again

Farewell folk
No no love again

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« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2019, 07:39:06 AM »
With the right music, this could just SING and FLY.  With the wrong music, it will die.  Many very good lyrics are like that. 

It's a great lyric looking for just the exact right music. 
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Misanthropist

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« Reply #2 on: December 30, 2019, 02:33:18 PM »
G................... D
The man in a suit
G. ..........D
Is pretty cute
C. .... ...........D
Look at him now
C
Sad
D
Somehow
C. ...........................D
Things are looking grim
G........................C
There's no lady no lady
........C.....Em
with him

But the man has no doubt
She's somewhere in a crowd
Look at her now
Sad
Somehow
Looking really good
Waiting waiting for the man in a suit

They finally met
For a tete a tete
Look at them now
Sad
somehow
Trying and crying in vain
Cos there's no no love again

Em
Farewell folk
G....... D..... C. ......Em
No no love again

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« Reply #3 on: January 01, 2020, 02:38:25 AM »
You've overestimated me.  I can't read those chords and make them mean anything in real time.  BUT. . . you've picqued my curiosity.  If I get time, I'll work on that to see if I can hear it.   
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« Reply #4 on: January 01, 2020, 11:26:49 PM »
I am also intrigued...since you've included chords, does that mean you have a melody for this already? I sat down with my guitar and started strumming to see what would come and it all worked out pretty well until I got to the "There's no lady, no lady with him" section. Then it all fell apart for me. Couldn't make that bit work at all. I liked what I did up to there, though. @hardtwistmusic , I should send you what I did, in case you can use it while you're messing with it.

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« Reply #5 on: January 02, 2020, 08:54:50 PM »
G.........................D.................C...........Em
There's no lady with him

My mistake sorry and thanks for considering it I'm just playing it slow simple down up picking notes with my thumb here and there to embellish it a little ta a lot
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