Hi everyone, I've just finished this acoustic version of an old song that I originally cowrote with a mate (I did lyrics and melody) I'd love to know what you think? I initially threw the kitchen sink at this...but decided less is more leading to a mild crescendo at the end. Does it work? Thanks for your time.😁👍🏻
Listen to Kingdom Come (acoustic version) by Pebble Wreck on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/leo-b-5/kingdom-come-acoustic-versionLyrics.
She found me washed up on the shore
A stranger lost a shipwrecked soul
The life I thought I'd built on stone
Was drowning in the sand
Her eyes were warm and lighthouse bright
Her lips gave me the kiss of life
The words she spoke so beautiful
I longed to understand
Babylon, I see no hell fire here
My kingdom come is in her eyes
My sweet Amalie
If we only have this life your love is all I need
For so long I was just a skipping stone
Trying to stay afloat
But you gave land to me
And so I stay here at your humble throne
My kingdom come
She led me home through city walls
And lit a fire to warm my bones
And when she smiled a truth was known
I'd never be the same
Babylon, a revelation true
My kingdom come, she put me back together.