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digger72
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Reply #15 on:
December 08, 2019, 10:07:49 AM »
Hi Sarah,
Quality song and performance.
Really enjoyed the vocal - had just the right balance of vocal gymnastics.
The subtle harmonies worked very well.
Music forms the sea bed for your vocals to float over.
Great stuff.
Digger
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adamfarr
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December 08, 2019, 12:40:22 PM »
Excellent - this has it all, lyrics, melody and feeling. Really like the strings and backing vocals. Great stuff.
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sarahlawrence17
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Reply #17 on:
December 10, 2019, 10:28:53 AM »
Thank you so much everyone! I really appreciate you all taking the time to listen and write such kind and helpful things
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MichaelA
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Reply #18 on:
December 10, 2019, 11:29:21 AM »
Very talented! Great vocal, delicate yet assured. If you stick at it, it looks like you have the potential to write some really great songs for the future. I hope to hear them, well done!
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Jamie
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Reply #19 on:
December 10, 2019, 11:45:30 AM »
Hi, I can only echo the tone set by the other listeners. Accomplished, singing writing and playing. If this was recorded professionally it wouldn't sound out of place on the radio.
Very talented!
Cheers
Jamie
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