After a very busy year, I've just finished high school and decided to start sharing my music again. I know the production could be better as I make everything in my bedroom with limited equipment and not a lot of knowledge about sound engineering, so I'm more looking for feedback on the writing
https://soundcloud.com/sarahlawrencemusic/leavei was born underwater
i am made of the sea
i’m a highway man’s daughter
and he taught me how to speak
i’m a hard pill to swallow
i’m cold and i am cruel
and as sure as my sorrow
i have waited for you
lover, don’t leave
lover, don’t put this down
not now, when you were just learning to read
let me show you how
to draw me out
i was born in the winter
and it stayed all my life
and i learned how to whisper
the same way i learned to fly
learned i’m scared to try
lover, don’t leave
lover, don’t put this down
not now, when you were just learning to read
let me show you how
to draw me out
lover, don’t leave
lover, don’t let this go
you don’t know the half of what i can be
let me show you how
to draw me out
i want you more than i show
i want you more than you could know
lover, don’t leave
lover, don’t put this down
not now, when you were just learning to read
let me show you how
to draw me out
lover, don’t leave
lover, i’m so alone
you don’t know the half of what i can be
let me show you how
to draw me out