Hi Asith, welcome. There's a good track in here... some interesting lyrics, not predictable. I like the line about the cherry bomb, getting ripped to shreds, the tiger stripes. I like your voice too - well suited to this kind of indie vibe. The song to me had a bit of a Velvet Underground lo-fi feel. Main thing to work on is the production of course... not sure how you are recording it but the guitar is massively clipping by the sound of things. This would be cool with a decent mix behind it and some more tracks to flesh it out (get some bass and more interesting drums in there). Just get your hands on a DAW and you'll be rocking. Definitely has good potential and personally, this kind of indie vibe is right up my alley, I hope you can polish it. Anyway, enjoy the forum, review some tracks and you'll get great feedback here.