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RealKevM

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« on: November 25, 2019, 11:29:53 AM »
Hi guys here's a new rock n roll tune, please let me know what you think to the riff and the chorus if you have a couple of minutes. It's a demo so nothing special in terms of production. 

Lyrics

I can feel it growing in my head
I can feel it flowing through my veins
Cos this dreamer never ever left
I know how it feels to be in the morning rain

I don't know here i'm going baby
I just know where i've been
And if you're not what I want
You sure are what I need
Tear down the walls in here
Give me space to breathe
Open up your heart and soul
And your arms to me

I can see the sun shining down on me
I can see the world for what it is
Cos one match will burn a thousand trees
and I know how it feels to..miss


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« Reply #1 on: November 25, 2019, 03:03:22 PM »
It's great to here stripped back songs of this nature as they invite the listener to fill in the production blanks. That's a wicked guitar tone. I instantly imagined how the drums would join the party in a very Oasis like manner. It's a real rocker of a song for sure. There's even a section for a screaming guitar solo. It will be interesting to hear this develop over time!

Well done my friend!

Paul
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« Reply #2 on: November 25, 2019, 03:15:05 PM »
Yes, huge potential here @RealKevM Like Paul I can hear the drums kicking in and a badass geetar solo. Hope that you develop this further  :)

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« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2019, 11:25:13 PM »
Nice one Kev. Thats a great lick on the verse & I like the lyrics too. Looking forward to hearing more of this. Thanks.
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« Reply #4 on: December 03, 2019, 02:22:38 PM »
Cheers lads, yeah Paul @Wicked Deeds it's screaming out for a solo isn't it, I was going to do one for this demo but couldn't be mithered, will do for another version tho.
I need to somehow get drums sorted for my songs but i'm using a digital recorder thing so God knows. I'll just wait until Warners sign me and put me in a studio and the engineer or whoever can do them :) @pompeyjazz
@5 guys named Lars Nice one thanks for checking it out!