Heyo! This is a low-quality recorded demo I made for a band I played in and wrote songs for. The band's since died, but I liked the song, so I dug up the demo to see how it stands. It's a short, punky, guitar riff-driven track. It's vaguely about the music industry, but my lyrics weren't very prolific back then :3
The obvious issues are the poor recording quality and the tempo and timing issues, especially with the digitally drawn in drums (no drummer
). I want to know if fans of the genre like the structure of the song; if it's something they'd listen to as an actually well-produced track
https://soundcloud.com/user-732643919/industrial-revolution-demoLyrics:
Concrete
The structure's going out the back door
In company
Bouquet and a power saw
Floodlights, dynamite, the satellite side of your mind
Take me
Originality has been cloned
In scarcity
Mechanical combustion
Oil spills, dirty thrills, sleeping pill swallowed in pride
Swim in blood money
Roll in a grave
Creation is burnt out
At the stake
Swim in blood money
Listen to pain
Praise the manufactured
Lies of saints
Power
Into gluttony, devour
The tower
Of the man of the hour
Congregate, asphixiate, renovate the liars abused
Louder
Till blood turns sour
The flower
Of sound turned solar
Control, fireball, broken soul, metal infused
Swim in blood money
Roll in a grave
Creation is burnt out
At the stake
Swim in blood money
Listen to pain
Praise the manufactured
Lies of saints
(Solo)
Swim in blood money
Roll in a grave
Creation is burnt out
At the stake
Swim in blood money
Listen to pain
Praise the manufactured
Lies of saints