Just the Same Old Song

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Welsh Steve

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« on: November 23, 2019, 12:36:25 PM »
https://soundcloud.com/steve-lewis-36/just-the-same-old-song

This is about remembering both good and bad times

Guaranteed to lower the tone
Never meant to make old bones
Broken lies and broken chains
Never made the same mistakes again

Cold conviction will never lie
See another's eyes and another crooked smile
Broken lies and broken chains
Don't forget those times that have slipped away

Tell tale sign never been a friend of mine
Pouring rain don't fall here again
Turn away there's nothing left to say
It's the same old song the same old game

Tell tale sign never been a friend of mine
Pouring rain don't fall here again
Turn away there's nothing left to say
It's the same old song the same old game


PaulyX

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« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2019, 10:51:33 PM »
Nice track Steve, I particularly like the guitar sounds you have gone for.  Plus the way the production in the second verse is quite different to the first verse... it has a nice evolution.  Production overall sounds good to me too, nicely balanced mix to my ears.  If you want suggestions, it is maybe a bit long and gets a bit repetitive by about 3:30, but that's an easy fix, plenty of places you could end it a bit earlier if you wanted a "radio edit".  You've got a good expressive voice too.
It's all too beautiful.

delb0y

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« Reply #2 on: November 29, 2019, 07:12:46 AM »
I really like the vocals - you have a great voice. The lyrics and melody and delivery is all really good - it all definitely hits the spot. Maybe, as Pauly alluded to, it could all be squeezed up a little. Really well done though, and good to have you here.
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sarahlawrence17

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« Reply #3 on: November 30, 2019, 11:33:16 AM »
I also really love your voice! The lyrics are pretty great too - I especially like this one: Cold conviction will never lie
See another's eyes and another crooked smile

Awesome song :)

Welsh Steve

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« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2019, 12:02:12 PM »
Thanks everyone, much appreciated. Let the editing beging

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« Reply #5 on: November 30, 2019, 02:27:02 PM »
Hi Steve - Nice sounding guitars and good vocal tone. It's a catchy little number for sure. I enjoyed the listen  :)