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Echoes

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adamwolf

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« on: November 06, 2019, 09:09:07 PM »
This song is a little more of happy song than the ones I share with this forum. It feels easier to write the sad songs honestly so I never knew how I felt about the final version of this song because I'm not sure lyrically if it's cheesy or just not good enough. I wanted it to give off that vibe of conversations at night and road trips with someone or some people that have a special place in your heart even if there is no actual name for the dynamic of that relationship is it a friendship is it more that kind of thing if that makes any sense.

I just want to know if this is pleasant to listen to, if the lyrics kind of make you think of similar scenarios in your life? or are the lyrics too cheesy? is the song good? is there anything to add to make it better? all feedback is welcome and appreciated, thank you in advance


Lyrics:

verse

staying in the middle of nowhere for the night
we had no clue where we are
I went out on the porch for a cigarette
and looked at the stars

you came to join me
we started to talk
it was so cold we couldn't tell
if it was our breath or the smoke

chorus:

I heard the echoes as we laughed
we shared our last cigarette in half
I heard the echoes as we laughed

verse

went to bed at three and woke up at six
everyone had a cup of coffee I had six
& went out on the road
I listened to Springsteen & you listened to the stones


chorus

I heard the echoes as we laughed
we woke our friend sleeping in the back
I heard the echoes as we laughed

bridge

then we all went away
because things sometimes really do change
but then I saw you today
       
it was raining and we got soaked
we still remembered our inside jokes

chorus

I heard the echoes as we laughed
shared our last cigarette in half
I heard the echoes as we laughed



let my blood only run out when my world decides
so run on...
run on

pompeyjazz

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« Reply #1 on: November 06, 2019, 09:40:35 PM »
Another really good song @adamwolf Well constructed and well delivered. You have a great unique style. Well done

Sebandme

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« Reply #2 on: November 07, 2019, 05:11:08 AM »
@adamwolf these lyrics just keep on coming dont they......fantastic!! Youve done great job on them. The chorus was again very very catchy. Like @pompeyjazz says your are very talented and unique. Keep writing man....i really like what you are doing. :)