Find a Sunny Spot

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Paulski

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« Reply #15 on: October 30, 2019, 08:05:36 PM »

“Find a sunny spot and shit in it?” Houston, we have a problem. Sorry  :)


@PaulAds "Find a sunny spot and shit yourself in it" has better "flow". :D

Maybe that's why I used "Set yourself in it" :D :D
« Last Edit: October 30, 2019, 08:07:24 PM by Paulski »

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« Reply #16 on: October 30, 2019, 08:08:01 PM »
 ;D
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« Reply #17 on: October 31, 2019, 08:30:21 PM »
@Paulski - This is chalk and cheese for me, I love the musicality, but it reminded me of a few things that were my nemesis - boring sermons when I was a kid, and traking my daughter to ballet lessons,

More cheese than a US infocommercial.

Sorry man, this one passed me by, on the other side of the street, probably looking for a sunny spot.

Nicely produced though, did you really get Houston to stand in front of your neumann, chewing away at the pop filter?

Good to hear domething different.

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« Reply #18 on: November 01, 2019, 01:54:23 AM »
I like positivity. Always. I think this sounds a bit like a song for kids and, of course, I'm in my second childhood, so I like it.

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« Reply #19 on: November 04, 2019, 03:16:59 PM »
Hi Paul, you are the master of cheese, cheese supremo, cheese meister....... ;D ;D ;D.Not my thing as you know but didn't stop smiling all the way through and I laughed out loud at the outro. I also got the Randy Newman vibe too!
Always worth a listen. I'm in Toronto in a couple of weeks I'll give you a wave ;)
Cheers
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« Reply #20 on: November 04, 2019, 06:31:34 PM »
Paul
Loads to like here. Made me smile.
Simple and direct lyrics which really deliver message
and you provide just the right musical backdrop
Like the best of tunes you think its been a standard and around for years.
Got to be a Pixar/Disney soundtrack imho
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neil   
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Paulski

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« Reply #21 on: November 07, 2019, 12:57:43 AM »
Cheers guys for listening

@cowparsleyman - chalk and cheese - hehe - guilty as charged ;D Thx for commenting anyway ;D

@CaliaMoko Thanks Vicky - yep had the kids in mind when I wrote this. Glad you found it positive ;D

@Jamie cheers Jamie - happy to hear you were entertained ;D Watch out in TO you don't catch the cheesy bug. I'm about 300 kms from TO so you'll have to have a big hand waving for me to see it from here.

@Neil C thanks Neil - that's high praise from your talented self. A standard - I can only dream ;D

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« Reply #22 on: November 09, 2019, 09:46:23 AM »
Entertaining as ever.  You’re a writer who will see a song in any theme.  As ever, I really respect your approach to writing - long may it continue!

Paul