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Heavenly Skatepark
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Sunduta
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Heavenly Skatepark
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October 23, 2019, 01:40:22 AM »
Hello
cca 6 months have passed since I published last song. There were more factors involved in this. I watched movie Amadeus and felt like ultimate music zero. Also I was rather playing from sheets, critically listening to music and willing to make next composition more diverse. Because of paranoia, I deleted music profiles and gave up on music for few weeks. Finally I started watching anime Nodame Cantabile, which is about classical music, great inspiration. Unfortunately I am still able to write only major scale hackneyed songs
This song is about heaven, a place without conflict and pain and also with a bunch of skaters and that femme fatale
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pompeyjazz
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Re: Heavenly Skatepark
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October 23, 2019, 10:05:07 PM »
Hi
@Sunduta
.What a brilliant song title. This one nearly rattled my remaining teeth out. I'm at a rave in 89 foaming at the mouth. Its pretty full on, non stop and intense. Good on you for getting it out there
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cowparsleyman
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October 24, 2019, 02:55:08 PM »
Interesting indeed, great to hear edm here again....
Loved the synths, nice and wide, Maybe look at making more from the beats...
Watch your pumping though, it didn’t sound intentional.
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MonnoDB
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October 27, 2019, 07:12:27 PM »
Hey
@Sunduta
- I don't think I've come across your work before. This is very accomplished .. great theme... Relentless in a good way
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Sunduta
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October 28, 2019, 11:09:30 AM »
Thanks for nice comments, I am glad you like it
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mickyplankton
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Re: Heavenly Skatepark
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October 28, 2019, 07:14:17 PM »
This brought a big smile to my face. I don't think I can offer any meaningful feedback on the composition or production. Hope it was as fun to write/record as it is to listen to.
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PaulyX
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October 29, 2019, 10:30:35 PM »
I love your imagination mate... picturing heaven as being full of people skating. That's kinda beautiful... I can't skate though, I guess they won't let me in. :-( The track has bags of energy and I liked the combination of the reverbed piano with the EDM / video game style sounds. Structure is very interesting too, you never know where it is going to take you... a good fun joy ride of a track.
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It's all too beautiful.
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