Hi Adam
You've got a great emotive voice - and that makes the song dramatic IMO.
Damn good for a first song posted on here.
I think you could work on your timing a bit - I had a problem detecting a time signature in this that was consistent. But maybe it's just me.
Keep writing - you got the talent
Paul
Thanks, I'm glad my you think that about my voice!
Yeah I definitely don't have the greatest sense of rhythm, I'll work on it.
I really appreciate it, thanks Paul