Heres the idea, Thanks to all that have responded so far..
I'll be very interested to hear the feedback from the forum.
Feel free to download it.. add any ideas for the melody line for LVox..Lyrics...whatever you want to do...open season.
Personally I think
@Rightly or
@Dom Hunt would make it come alive, or
@pompeyjazz (if you half talk have growl in your best Costello voice
)
@crystalsuzy would also be a great vocalist. I would direct the vocalist to make it sound edgey, cryptic, and the focal point, kind of song where you were not so sure at the first listen, then warm to it in subsequent listens...uneasy lyrics, that a slightly off putting (the same kind of thing like the 'Wipe away the chicken fat.. in Spitting Feathers)
If you want me to change the chr bass line I'm OK about that, there's no M8, but I think it needs one...getting a bit boring imho, needs a break from the riff.
Good luck....
@Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra - I won't be releasing this, so no issues there....and your'e right they won't care about little ol me.
@Jack Simmons - Jack, thanks for the response - best of luck with the song.