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Sebandme:
Hey everyone,

So got this song no name for it it got the lyrics for verse and a chorus but the bridge is well.....non exsistant if any of you folk have suggestions let me know. I recorded it and have man flu so the chorus is in a lower octave but hopefully youll get an idea....heres the lyrics

Verse1


I choked on every single word you said
Life as we knew it would never be the same again.
The shock of your words made my blood run cold
oh ritchie man, you’ll just never know.

how the summer days would feel on our skin,
how the winter nights would keep drawing us in.


bridge

I I I I


chorus
I kept running I kept running,
to get anywhere away from here.
I kept running, I kept on running,
I didnt want to accept what
I didn't want to accept what happened that day.


Verse2

Every single day you’d creep into my thoughts,
Left me asking questions for what id know the answers for.
Pointless reasons for circumstances i cant change,
Man, im going round in circles thinking of you again. 

Bridge
I I I I

Chorus 2
I kept on running I kept on running,
to anywhere i couldnt feel the pain
I kept on running, I kept on running,
I didnt want to accept what,
I didnt want to accept what happened that day , that day

Let me cry
Lord let me cry
Oh lord I
Oh cry.

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