Hi,
Here's an interesting song about immigration. I received the lyrics out of the blue in an email from a lovely guy i've co-written with on songwriting retreats. No instructions or "Hi Neil would you like to.."
But there were pretty inspiring imho. So here it is in a singer songwriter style. Any suggestions welcomed as I think I'd like to go into a pro studio to redo vocals etc.
:-)
neil
https://soundcloud.com/neilconnor-2/becoming-an-american-july-2019Red Ford pickup, white picket fence
Yellow ribbons, flower on the corner
I didn’t talk, Its easier that way
No one likes a wise ass or a new kid on the block
I tried fishing. I tried donuts
Could be back at sea. Salt’s a taste I can’t forget
We all try to remember, we all try to forget
I see what you cannot
Name the stem and petals. Forget me not
Searching for sun, the darkness kept me in
In the underbelly where there’s no food
Rubber boats. Deserts without air
Shoes without soul. Kicks that land and kicks that miss.
We all try to remember, we all try to forget
I see what you cannot
Name the stem and petals. Forget me not
Hey what’s your name? Where you from?
Stuck on repeat. Stuck. On repeat
Low fi. Low. Below. There was only sounds we didn’t make
I became an American. I tried to work it out
Become the water for the drought
I pick my moment. No one likes the new kid but they all like to fish.
Get a meal on the table. Its what we do
We all try to remember, we all try to forget
I see what you cannot
Name the stem and petals. Forget me not
c wells/connor 2019