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Sometimes I write a song that is hard for me to sing

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« on: October 01, 2019, 10:44:46 PM »
In those cases, I ask somebody else to sing it for me. This is one of those cases.
https://hoponpop.bandcamp.com/track/im-pathetic

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« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2019, 05:53:54 PM »
This is great but I think the vocals are too low!

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« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2019, 06:22:37 PM »
Hi, enjoyed it, strangely for me it had a bit of a cross English/California feel to it. I think it was parts of the melody and the guitar playing. I too thought the vocals could have been a little more forward.
Good song!
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« Reply #3 on: October 06, 2019, 07:41:28 AM »
Super track, I think I remember if from your ‘Chicken’ album. Has a lovely American indie vibe a la Dinosaur Junior or Pavement, some great lines like ‘the pain that you’ve been looking for’. Very much my kind of track. Nicely sculpted with plenty of dynamics.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #4 on: October 06, 2019, 09:22:55 AM »
I really enjoyed it great track! Thanks for sharing! Definitely my sort of thing. We need more indie in the world :-)

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« Reply #5 on: October 06, 2019, 01:40:38 PM »
Thanks for checking it out!
Glad that you enjoyed it.

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« Reply #6 on: October 07, 2019, 08:23:41 PM »
Hi,
It's a good track but actually the voice is a little low.
I like that the intensity increases at times. It's well managed. There is something good about vocal interpretation, that's for sure and there is a good rhythm guitar.
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« Reply #7 on: October 08, 2019, 07:50:12 PM »
@PopTodd - Really like this one Todd, LVox perfect not too low, great production, lovely BVox, hooky as hell, superb work, just love the way the gtr solo starts before the Vox stops. Not too polished which I really like. Vocal arrangement was well organised.

Really very good.

To me it has shades of Steely Dan...




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« Reply #8 on: October 08, 2019, 08:10:03 PM »
@cowparsleyman
HA!
It's funny you should mention The Dan. that rhythm guitar part was actually inspired by "Peg."
I love the feel.

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback. I really appreciate it.

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« Reply #9 on: October 08, 2019, 08:15:05 PM »
@PopTodd - freaky man, i love that song, honestly i bought an eventide flanger just this afternoon to have a go at something similar I also know that @nooms is a Dan fan...

I’d love to a remix of one of theirs, maybe work a bit more on you song...

So cool Todd

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« Reply #10 on: October 08, 2019, 11:48:04 PM »
Everytime that I listen to this, I can't help but think that I should've faded it out instead of had a sloppy ending like that.