Believe (First Demo, Work In Progress, Advice Needed)

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« Reply #15 on: April 26, 2019, 05:38:01 PM »
Hi Kev.

Track sounds cool,

My 2 penneth is that I would make the melody line of the chorus and verses different, I like the melody line of the chorus, Maybe make the verse different.

Nice work dude, BTW, like the lyrics on this too, you do put out some cool lines.

Andy
Cheers mate, I am proud of this one. I'll look into changing the melody up, I appreciate your advice :)

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« Reply #16 on: April 29, 2019, 11:23:25 AM »
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« Reply #18 on: December 03, 2019, 02:26:37 PM »
Right lads for those following what I do (and I really appreciate it) here's a reworked version of this tune, it starts off slow now and around the 1 min mark things kick in. I think that the new dynamic works well, what do you think?