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We are what we are

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AngryMonkey

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« on: September 29, 2019, 11:11:47 PM »
This is somewhat of a story of how my relationship with this girl progressed, any feedback would be extremely appreciated.

CHORUS
I cant explain it
Nor give any reason
We just are what we are
I cant understand it
Nor see any logic
But we just are what we are

VERSE1
Sitting across the room
Throwing glances from time to time
Hoping you'd notice me
Moving closer everyday
But still feels like we far away
Waiting till the gap closes

CHORUS
I cant explain it
Nor give any reason
We just are what we are
I cant understand it
Nor see any logic
But we just are what we are

VERSE 2
Getting lost in your eyes
Feels like I'm falling in
As you fall into me
Heart beating faster
Head's a disaster
As I get lost into you

CHORUS
I cant explain it
Nor give any reason
We just are what we are
I cant understand it
Nor see any logic
But we just are what we are

BRIDGE
And now you always by my side
And I'm lost when you gone
And I'm found when you back
And I promise to never give you up
Even if the world is our enemy
Ohhh ohhh oh

CHORUS
I cant explain it
Nor give any reason
We just are what we are
I cant understand it
Nor see any logic
But we just are what we are

Felixthekiwi

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« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2019, 03:44:22 AM »
Hey!
Thanks for sharing.
What kind of feedback are you looking for specifically? What are you looking to improve on these?
I like the 6 line sections, feels like it flows well when I speak it.
Do you have music to go with these?