My Cheesy Song

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Paulski

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« on: September 28, 2019, 04:57:57 PM »
So go ahead - call this one cheesy all you like!  :D
I'll take it as a compliment!  :D :D

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My Cheesy Song

My girl has a job in a cheese shop
We meet in a room at the back
We whisper so no-one can eavesdrop
Except for the Monterey Jack

This is my cheesy song
I swear it won't be very long
Its notes are as sharp as an old Parmesan
But I hope you can sing along

Her lips are a soft Mozzarella
Her skin is a smooth Camambert
I love when she calls on her fella
To remove Gouda chunks from her hair

This is my cheesy song
I swear it won't be very long
Its notes are as sharp as an old Parmesan
But I hope you can sing along

I am her Edam - she is my Eve
We roll in a garden of Feta and Brie
Jalapeño kisses as hot as an oven
She melts my resistance with her cheesy lovin'

And
This is my cheesy song
I swore it wouldn't be very long
But I have to go now - our pizza is done
And so is this cheesy song

Yes I have to go now - our pizza is done
And so is my cheesy
Easy
Brie-zy
And so is my cheesy song!

« Last Edit: September 29, 2019, 04:12:25 AM by Paulski »

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« Reply #1 on: September 29, 2019, 07:24:28 AM »
I really like cheese too.
Due to the way it is produced it's really a guilty pleasure.
The songs starts off very clever but the middle
With garden of Edam the song really takes off.
It seems you can write on anything that catches your attention.
Well done.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #2 on: September 29, 2019, 09:02:02 AM »
Really clever and fun song...perfectly pitched in length so that it was over before the mice started throwing themselves onto the traps 😂

An old Bernard Manning gag...sorry.

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« Reply #3 on: September 29, 2019, 09:08:33 AM »
Yeah..again and again your writing shines..as Paul said, it's Broadways loss innit!!
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« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2019, 12:32:57 PM »
Wonderful- a missed number 1 from 1978, a spot on the morecombe and wise show, very very clever.

I guess cambazola, and allgauer Berg käse was a stretch for rhyming.

Made me smile all the way through, thanks Paul.

Why not have a toast mid8 would go well together?


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« Reply #5 on: September 29, 2019, 01:15:46 PM »
"And this year's Academy Award for the best rhyme goes to.... the coupling of 'cheese shop' with 'eavesdrop'... congratulations Paulski!"
From that rhyme on, it was clearly going to be impossible not to love this.  A bit Monty Pythonesque and utterly silly - and all the better for that.  Thanks for a big smile.
It's all too beautiful.

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« Reply #6 on: September 29, 2019, 02:07:39 PM »
Marvelous Paul, perfectly krafted. Had me laughing all the way through, especially the Edam and Eve line. Seriously, it's really well put together and as others have said, it should be in a musical. 5 stars for invention and execution  ;D

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« Reply #7 on: September 29, 2019, 05:01:22 PM »
Yes the first verse lyric is epic.

Where's the cheesy accordion in the 'lips are mozzarella' bit? Oh well we get that barrel organ bit in the middle which makes up for that....gives us that old Europe sound.

Bet that back room got a bit close on a hot summer's day.

Yep, it's cheesy all right.
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« Reply #8 on: September 29, 2019, 05:37:39 PM »
Haha this was hilarious! :D
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« Reply #9 on: September 30, 2019, 11:05:24 AM »
Just really entertaining that is all! Anyone got any cheese jokes to go with it? Maybe better not...

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« Reply #10 on: September 30, 2019, 02:00:18 PM »
Hi Paul, whey to go :o.Loved it, such a brilliant lyric and great composition in the old Broadway style.Brilliant.
Great listen.
Cheese
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« Reply #11 on: September 30, 2019, 09:48:52 PM »
Very smart and as such not entirely cheesy. But very entertaining all the way through and a performance so accomplished you can just allow yourself to be immersed into the fun and cleverness of it all.

Bravo on a unique idea and expert execution.
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« Reply #12 on: October 01, 2019, 02:19:10 AM »
Great job ! very clever and well put together!
I enjoyed it....Ray

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« Reply #13 on: October 01, 2019, 01:54:13 PM »
Mmmm cheese.  :)

'Minds me I have a wedge of Wensleydale with Cranberry in the fridge...brb...

'PARP'. Ah,that's better.  :)

Oh,yeah,the song?

Can a piece be cheesy and classy simultaneously? When if it can't,then I reckon you've just concocted a new genre Paul.

As ever man,I love your wordplay,you're inventiveness all wrapped up in a classy clingfilm.  8)

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« Reply #14 on: October 03, 2019, 08:29:02 PM »
@Rightly cheers rightly very kind of you  :D

@PaulAds .. and Broadway's better off because of it  :D thanks Paul for the nice comments

@shadowfax cheers Kevin

@cowparsleyman thanks for that - yep could have made it even more cheesy I suppose. It gets pretty ripe as it is though  ;D

@PaulyX - thanks - I debated on the eavesdrop line - seemed a bit IDK.. cheesy. Realising that clinched it  ;D I love Monty P - happy to see that reference  :D A nod's as good as a wink to a blind bat:D :D

@pompeyjazz thanks John There's a thin line between inventive and crazy which I would happily walk  :D

@Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra - thanks for that Ian. Now you've said it, I can hear an accordian there too - my grandpa was Italian - maybe a Godfather vibe could be done. Glad you smelled the cheese in this one  :D

@t.wretborn - thank you kind sir. Musical is in the works  ;D

@adamfarr Thanks Adam .. entertaining is all I can hope for  :D

@Jamie cheers Jamie - means a lot as I'm pretty sure this isn't a genre you listen to much  :D

@MichaelA  thanks Michael maybe we could do broadway together - and ugly baby and a cheesy song - might just work these days.  ;D

@Bostonfan2 thanks Ray - glad you enjoyed  :D

@Skub Davey my man - very kind of you. Want a little whine with that?

And a big thanks to all those who commented on SC  :D :D
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