Hey everyone, newbie here...opinions please

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Sebandme

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« Reply #15 on: October 03, 2019, 09:42:31 AM »
@Viscount Cramer & His Orchestra thanks for the feedback, im glad you like it. Im so happy that people feel its catchy. Once again thanks for taking the time and listening.

MonnoDB

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« Reply #16 on: October 03, 2019, 06:37:54 PM »
Hey @Sebandme - I really like this! Great melody and I really like your vocals.. You have a really great sound Only thing I didn't like what sounded like claps - they didn't work for me but that's probably just me :). Look forward to hearing more of your music - loved this...

And welcome to the forum!

Karen.

Sebandme

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« Reply #17 on: October 04, 2019, 12:46:50 PM »
@MonnoDB ta for the feedback.....and yeah itis claps you can hear and yeah I agree on reflection they dont sit right with me either.


Glad you loved it.

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Neil C

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« Reply #18 on: October 04, 2019, 01:59:29 PM »
Hi,
Welcome.
Neat indie warming song, lots to like including the vocals melodically float.
Likely the arrangmemt including stereo was and Coldplay guitar solo.
Only thought I have is that the vocals are buried in the mix and maybe could have less fx?
:-) neil

ps as Jamie says check out the 'rules' and get stuck in
songwriter of no repute..

Sebandme

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« Reply #19 on: October 06, 2019, 08:26:21 AM »
@Neil C thsnks for the kind comments its much appreciated. Yeah i really need to figure out how to mix/produce my stuff better as its definitely letting me down. Thanks for taking the time to check it out. I have been taking Jamies advice and discovering some really talented people on here. Love it.


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« Reply #21 on: October 10, 2019, 08:47:20 PM »
This is really well put together @Sebandme You have obviously put a lot of thought into it. Great indie vibe. Reminded me of some of the stuff that The Verve knocked out and also some Pete Wylie stuff. Great arrangement and some lovely ear tickles with the panning of the guitars. Welcome to the forum and I hope that you stick around  :)

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« Reply #22 on: October 11, 2019, 01:37:54 AM »
Nice one - I like the lyrics and melody lines especially.
The mix is pretty dense - could use some space but it really is a good song.
Oh yeah, and welcome to the forum  ;D
More please!
Paul

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« Reply #23 on: October 12, 2019, 07:30:11 PM »
Hi Wayne,welcome to here.

I really enjoyed the song. Vocals seem influenced by Thom Yorke and maybe a little Coldplay,which is no bad thing in my book. I think it's a fine song and very well performed. Someone with mixing skills would really make it shine.  8)

Sebandme

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« Reply #24 on: October 12, 2019, 09:20:35 PM »
@Skub wasnt an intentional Thom yorke reference but thanks ill take that all.day long. Thankyou for the positive comments it really means alot. Yes i completely agree if better produce it could be better and is something im working on.

@pompeyjazz cheers for the comments much appreciated.

@PaulAds glad you liked it.