[Sullish]

Our 3rd offering, feel free to comment......

http://snd.sc/rXgCN4





Sunlight turns to moonlight see the starlight in your eyes
Pictures of rainbows from your window in the sky
LA lady see the sunshine in your smile
Take my breath away with a look that leaves me high

Your first name is a second name and your hair burns like a flame

How can it be unrequited love when you don’t even know that I love you
How can we ever see the stars above when you don’t even know that I love you

On the radio you play my favourite song
Spinning choons around so I listen all night long
See the stars come out and brighten up the sky
It would be ethereal if you were in my life

Green eyes stare at me through cyberspace
So alive, not a line upon your face, your face.....

[nooms]

reall good song
love the guitar, isleys , brilliant
mix is weird though, need to get a bit of clarity in there, backbone drums and bass,
backing track is fairly indistinct, the good vocal carrys it through, mix improved especially in the outro where i was by now singing along, great ..excellent ending
i was confused a bit in the change, where it all drops back, nice idea, but need to tighten that up a bit..
great though,
nooms

[Schavuitje]

Hiya

I thought this was very well put together. Through my headphones I couldn't really find anything wrong
with the mix although I thought the vocals needed to be tighter. The backing vocals sound slightly late.
Great offereing though. I agree with Nooms that the dropout at around 3:18 sounded a bit forced and didn't work
for me.
Really good song. Thanks for sharing

[Sullish]

Thanks guys, appreciate your comments.

[Sullish]

Xmas bump!

[tina m]

hey ernie isleys living in suffolk!
i like the song but something sounds a bit wrong in the mix things dont seem quite in sync
the vocals werent quite tight enough either.. the backing vocal was a bit off...but i still enjoyed it i was a massive isleys fan!

[Sullish]

 

[Dutchbeat]

nice atmosphere in this song. very enjoyable

and good songwriting!

about the backing vocals...well others already said that, but some parts have these timing issues....for the rest is sounds very good to me

[Sullish]

Thanks Dutch beat, re=doing the vocals shortly.....

[Sullish]

More please!

[Schavuitje]

You might want to spend more time on the forums reviewing before you shamelessly bump 3 of your own posts.