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Do You Want Me

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Modestmouse1965/

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« on: August 28, 2019, 10:35:47 PM »
https://soundcloud.com/user-335183051/do-u-want-me

I put this in Finished Songs as the idea is finished. I do realize the Lead guitar part is out of sinc but will be re-written for the re-record and still some work needed on it. Cheers.
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« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2019, 07:16:25 AM »
One song every two weeks my friend...please read the guidelines :)

Modestmouse1965/

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« Reply #2 on: August 29, 2019, 03:54:17 PM »
Ok i missed that rule cheers.

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« Reply #3 on: September 04, 2019, 08:58:16 AM »
Steve, enjoying the live and energetic feel with the surfy garage rock guitars and vocals. And powerful chorus and cool ending too.
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« Reply #4 on: September 08, 2019, 10:04:21 AM »
Hi Stevy,

Great energy.
Rocks like a good un.
Love how the bass drives the song along.

Reminds me a bit of Ned's Atomic Dustbin. Tracks like Kill Your Television.
Don't know if you're familiar with them?

The vocals are the real star for me. Great job.

Digger

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« Reply #5 on: September 09, 2019, 10:55:41 AM »
Good energy in the song and the bass and guitar drives the song to the end, and the vocals are really good :)
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« Reply #6 on: September 09, 2019, 07:41:44 PM »
Thanks Digger and Luke. I am in the middle of re-recording this with more attention on the lead guitar part. Haven't heard of Ned's Atomic Dustbin but will give them a listen. Cheers guys.

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« Reply #7 on: September 09, 2019, 09:10:40 PM »
Very good.  (Can you post the lyrics?)  The main guitar riff is pretty addictive - slight hints of the Peter Gunn theme.  Nice walloping big chorus too and I really like the vocal treatment.  I'd definitely like to hear the re-record as it is already pretty smashing.  Great no nonsense ending too!
It's all too beautiful.

Modestmouse1965/

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« Reply #8 on: September 10, 2019, 06:47:20 PM »
Thanks PaulyX will get the lyrics up in the next couple of days. Glad you like it Got a few rockin raw songs like this but re-recording everything i have written in the past and also in the middle of writing new stuff but like us all its a juggling act with work, family and everything that goes with it. I would much rather have time than money.